The Death of Achilles by Borin Akunin
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quippeThe Blurb On The Back:
Erast Fandorin returns to Moscow after an absence of six years, only to find himself instantly embroiled in court politics and scandal. His old friend General Sobolev - the famous 'Russian Achilles' - has been found dead in a hotel room, and Fandorin suspects foul play. Using his now-famous powers of detection, Fandorin embarks on an investigation, during which the political and the personal may become dangerously blurred. With the assistance of some formidable martial arts skills, acquired while Fandorin was in Japan, our eccentric and ingenious hero must endeavour to discover not so much whodunnit, as why.
As I said in my reviews of Turkish Gambit and Murder on the Leviathan, the Fandorin series is being translated out of sequence. This was not such a problem for the reader where those two books were concerned, but (for me) it was a barrier to enjoying this one.
This is because we are told that Fandorin has spent 4 years in Japan, during which time he clearly had at least one mystery to solve because not only has he picked up an impressive array of martial arts skills (there's one, very well written scene where he gets to use a set of nunchaka and there are a number of instances where he displays his profficiency with sharinken throwing stars. The problem is that this is such a sudden development for a character we previously understood to only practice gymnastic skills that it comes across as something of a Gary-Stu trait. Similarly, Fandorin has now picked up a devoted Japanese manservant called Masa and whilst we get intriguing references to the story behind this (i.e. we know that Masa was in the Yakuza and that Fandorin saved his life) it would have been nice to understand the build up to this relationship and the clear friendship that exists between the two. Indeed, some of the best exchanges in the book are the culture clash scenes between Masa and Fandorin and my favourite was a scene where Masa allows a Russian lady into Fandorin's bathroom whilst his master is in a bath of ice cold water, on the basis that he thinks she's a prostitute.
As for the mystery itself, well it's nice to have a degree of continuity back to Turkish Gambit, although Sobolov never interacts with Fandorin here except in the victim sense and we do see Captain Guksamov again, who has more of a role in the early chapters. In fact, we also see the return of a character from The Winter Queen, with Fandorin's old police boss, Grushin, although it is regrettable that his role is cut short in one of the twist scenes as he was a believable foil for Fandorin's methods. As the Blurb on the Back says, this is not however, a whodunnit like the previous novels. In the final third, we are told that the person responsible is Achimas who, in another nice reference to The Winter Queen, was responsible for killing Fandorin's wife at the end of that book. Instead the mustery revolves around why and how he did it and it unravels nicely right up until the final third where Akunin, for some reason decides to fill us in on the entire backstory of Achimas and how he came to be who he is, before briefly summarising the book's plot from his perpective.
As a character, Achimas is fascinating - his violent upbringing and callous regard to others is well drawn out, as is his attraction for the femme fatale Wanda. It transpires that Fandorin's assassination was one of only a couple that he's bungled and for tie-in reasons, I would have loved to have seen that scene play out from his perspective (on the basis that it would have helped jog the reader's mind more as to what happened). However, in terms of how this book is structured, I found this sudden change in perspective to be jarring - almost like a bolt on because Akunin couldn't figure out another way of introducing him. Personally, I think that it would have worked better to have the Achimas scenes intersected with Fandorin's investigation in order to round it out more.
I also had an issue with the ending. It seems at first that Akunin is going for a deliberately downbeat ending with a pyrrhic victory for Fandorin who discovered the 'why' and also has whatever illusions he had about the Russian government, totally destroyed. I actually quite liked that ending - it would have been a nice set up for the next in the series and it would have helped round out the, at times idealistic, detective. However, Akunin then changes his mind by having Akunin taken back into the realms of Government and his endeavours recognised (albeit with some 19th century political spin and the use of another character as a fall guy). For me, that's a lost opportunity and although it will be interesting to see whether the moralistic gent can continue to work for the Government, it's not as interesting as fleeing the country in disgrace.
My only other comment about the book is that it really would be useful for the publishers to set out a list of characters at the front. As I've said before, they did this for The Winter Queen and it does help you to sort through all the Russian names (particularly as Akunin uses two versions of the same name to describe certain characters).
The Verdict:
The final third of the book lets it down (IMHO), but it's still an enjoyable read and it's nice to see Akunin get some humour and humanity into Erast Fandorin through the use of his Japanese sidekick. Definitely worth a read if you're familiar with the series, but the publishers are doing readers a disservice by translating them out of order.
Erast Fandorin returns to Moscow after an absence of six years, only to find himself instantly embroiled in court politics and scandal. His old friend General Sobolev - the famous 'Russian Achilles' - has been found dead in a hotel room, and Fandorin suspects foul play. Using his now-famous powers of detection, Fandorin embarks on an investigation, during which the political and the personal may become dangerously blurred. With the assistance of some formidable martial arts skills, acquired while Fandorin was in Japan, our eccentric and ingenious hero must endeavour to discover not so much whodunnit, as why.
As I said in my reviews of Turkish Gambit and Murder on the Leviathan, the Fandorin series is being translated out of sequence. This was not such a problem for the reader where those two books were concerned, but (for me) it was a barrier to enjoying this one.
This is because we are told that Fandorin has spent 4 years in Japan, during which time he clearly had at least one mystery to solve because not only has he picked up an impressive array of martial arts skills (there's one, very well written scene where he gets to use a set of nunchaka and there are a number of instances where he displays his profficiency with sharinken throwing stars. The problem is that this is such a sudden development for a character we previously understood to only practice gymnastic skills that it comes across as something of a Gary-Stu trait. Similarly, Fandorin has now picked up a devoted Japanese manservant called Masa and whilst we get intriguing references to the story behind this (i.e. we know that Masa was in the Yakuza and that Fandorin saved his life) it would have been nice to understand the build up to this relationship and the clear friendship that exists between the two. Indeed, some of the best exchanges in the book are the culture clash scenes between Masa and Fandorin and my favourite was a scene where Masa allows a Russian lady into Fandorin's bathroom whilst his master is in a bath of ice cold water, on the basis that he thinks she's a prostitute.
As for the mystery itself, well it's nice to have a degree of continuity back to Turkish Gambit, although Sobolov never interacts with Fandorin here except in the victim sense and we do see Captain Guksamov again, who has more of a role in the early chapters. In fact, we also see the return of a character from The Winter Queen, with Fandorin's old police boss, Grushin, although it is regrettable that his role is cut short in one of the twist scenes as he was a believable foil for Fandorin's methods. As the Blurb on the Back says, this is not however, a whodunnit like the previous novels. In the final third, we are told that the person responsible is Achimas who, in another nice reference to The Winter Queen, was responsible for killing Fandorin's wife at the end of that book. Instead the mustery revolves around why and how he did it and it unravels nicely right up until the final third where Akunin, for some reason decides to fill us in on the entire backstory of Achimas and how he came to be who he is, before briefly summarising the book's plot from his perpective.
As a character, Achimas is fascinating - his violent upbringing and callous regard to others is well drawn out, as is his attraction for the femme fatale Wanda. It transpires that Fandorin's assassination was one of only a couple that he's bungled and for tie-in reasons, I would have loved to have seen that scene play out from his perspective (on the basis that it would have helped jog the reader's mind more as to what happened). However, in terms of how this book is structured, I found this sudden change in perspective to be jarring - almost like a bolt on because Akunin couldn't figure out another way of introducing him. Personally, I think that it would have worked better to have the Achimas scenes intersected with Fandorin's investigation in order to round it out more.
I also had an issue with the ending. It seems at first that Akunin is going for a deliberately downbeat ending with a pyrrhic victory for Fandorin who discovered the 'why' and also has whatever illusions he had about the Russian government, totally destroyed. I actually quite liked that ending - it would have been a nice set up for the next in the series and it would have helped round out the, at times idealistic, detective. However, Akunin then changes his mind by having Akunin taken back into the realms of Government and his endeavours recognised (albeit with some 19th century political spin and the use of another character as a fall guy). For me, that's a lost opportunity and although it will be interesting to see whether the moralistic gent can continue to work for the Government, it's not as interesting as fleeing the country in disgrace.
My only other comment about the book is that it really would be useful for the publishers to set out a list of characters at the front. As I've said before, they did this for The Winter Queen and it does help you to sort through all the Russian names (particularly as Akunin uses two versions of the same name to describe certain characters).
The Verdict:
The final third of the book lets it down (IMHO), but it's still an enjoyable read and it's nice to see Akunin get some humour and humanity into Erast Fandorin through the use of his Japanese sidekick. Definitely worth a read if you're familiar with the series, but the publishers are doing readers a disservice by translating them out of order.
